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Reviews for To Have and To Hold. All comments are unsolicited and unedited. Some names have
been blanked for privacy reasons. Some reviews may have spoilers.
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9/10/06
Hi there. I'm writing to let you know how much I enjoyed your
Peter Pan
fanfiction, To Have And Hold. I thought it was very
imagination, witty,
adventurous, and all those other things. ^^ I
hope to read your other works.
Thanks for your amazing
website and story, and take care! ^_~v
H*****o Ai :o)
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14/09/06
What a beautiful story! I can't understand why it took me so
long to find it. I had almost given up on finding a truly good PP
fiction. I'm glad I didn't! I love the magic that you have weaved
into the story! I enjoyed the way you managed to keep them in
character. Their love is so believable, so romantic! And such a happy
ending! Well done! Thankyou for such a lovely story!
Vintena
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19/07/06
Hook, Line and sinker. You got me pulled in. This was
incrediable and I was happy to read this. I was surprise that some of
the story made me thought of the movie, Princess Bride, but that's
how I thought Peter and Wendy would be. I am happy how this story
turned out and it was such a pleasure to read. I hope that you do
more amazing work like this one because I have only one word to say
about this story, : Unforgettable.
Miko
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3/05/06
Bravo! I've got to say I loved your story - every second of
it! And, yes, I do realise it's a bit late coming because this
stories been completed for months but I just found it a week ago and
have hardly left my computer since ... It was so imaginative and I
felt so compelled to keep reading right to the end, which, in turn,
caused me to be late for school quite a few times (woops!) he he.
But yes it was so ... I can't think of the word! But yes, I
loved it and always will ...
I've got to say your ... er ...
love scenes were ... intriguing to say the least and had me blushing
like crazy! And the plot! Well, I have to say the plot was BRILLIANT!
I tell you what when I'm a famous movie director - because I really
REALLY want to be one! - I'll be coming straight back to you! Oscar's
all round! He he.
But yes, oh! And your originals were
fantastic by the way, Peter and Wendy's love was ... amazing! It left
me wishing I had - will have - something like that! --Sigh!-- Don't
we all?
Anyway, I'll get out of your hair now and go back to
my own feeble attempt at a story ... I'd be so much better if this
site let you write your own stories, I have this fantastic one that I
really want to get out their but will probably never be able to!
Because it's "not related to any of the topic's on guess
I'll have to take it somewhere else then ... Pity ...
0_o Look
at me! Bumbling again, stalling ... --smiles and raises eyebrow--
Anyway, yes, I'd better go ... 10's words to write before bed and,
inevitably, school --le sigh-- more like le complain, he he. TOOTLES!
Stars Tears.
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28/01/06
Major Spoilers Ahead
Sorry I didn't finish updating this story. I've never
forgotten to do so, it's just things had turned upside down in my
life and now they are back to normal.
I thought chapter
twelve had me all in knots, but thirteen definately did me in.
When Peter and Wendy finally made it out of the mountain alive after
meeting and leaving that Merman, I thought they'd get a breather.
Awesome job of keeping the audience in suspense, Squeezynz with the
immediate capture by Hook and his men upon exiting the mountain.
Hooks treatment was very cruel and just how I'd expect him to treat
Peter. But, Oh how you had my heart racing with that tornado
and the scene within it. THAT WAS SUPER AMAZING. Peter
blocking Wendy's love to help summon that anger was very imaginative.
That was definitely the highlight for me in chapter thirteen.
Your
love scenes are beautiful, hot and SEXY! From the sweet first
time to the hot and quicky, leaves one...breathless. {blushing}
The
whole story has many parts that created a wonderful novel. Your
original characters did a great job in making the story flow right
till the end. It was nice to see that throughout the many
trials they faced, the two who belong together, was able to work out
thier differences and live as a happy couple with a sweet little
addition to make the family complete.
In the future I
would like to see what happens when Peter takes Wendy back to visit
her family, and to show off the children she gave birth to in
Neverland.
Thanks for a great read once again and I'm sorry
it took me so long to finish posting a feedback.
Rolletti
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22/01/06
Oh my goodness! I'm crying!
*sniff*
I'm
sorry I haven't been reviewing every chapter, but I was reading this
ever so late at night...
Wonderful!
Lalaith
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20/01/06
This fic was absolutely brilliant! I didn't get any of my
homework done until I had finished it. I look forward to reading more
of your stories!
Cat
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11/01/06
This is undoubtedly the best Peter Pan fan fiction I have ever
read. I was enchanted from begeinning to end, and was online
all night because I couldn't bear to stop reading it until I was
finished. Magnificent work!
Solitaire
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19/11/05
Dear Louise,
I don't know if you remember me. I am Yvonne, your faithful Brazilian reader.
I have been accompanying your story "To Have and To Hold" through your homepage. I’m not sending reviews in the fanfiction because I’m terrible in English. I want to write a lot and I think can leave everything wrong. Then I prefer to send this message. (Sorry my poor English)
I’M LOVING "TO HAVE AND TO HOLD."
I think it is your best work. Sincerely.
The new characters, the dialogues, the content, the description of the atmosphere around the scenes, the characters' emotional demonstration (their thoughts, their actions) … they are fantastic creations. Mainly the human character (and magnificent) that you give to Peter Pan.
I’m of open mouth in seeing your creation capacity.
How do you get to have so many fantastic ideas in your mind and to get to put those same ideas in the paper (or computer)?
To know to write is a privilege. And to write well is a special talent. I consider you a blessed person. This is just the difference among being a true writer and being a person that writes. YOU ARE A TRUE WRITER.
My boss is a famous writer here in Brazil. (I’m using his e-mail) He writes books for children and he has a weekly chronicle in a Brazilian newspaper. I showed for him a chapter of To Have and To Hold." He liked a lot. And he said that you have the epic style of C. S. Lewis. I don't know the work of C. S. Lewis for that hopes that is a praise.
I only want to say that feel honest in reading their wonderful stories on our dear hero Peter Pan. They are pages of happiness, sadness, pain, love, passion, hate, jealousy, laughters and tears, anxiety, suspense, emotion, etc. etc. and etc. Chapters that make to laugh us and to cry. I’m vastly thanked by this present that you provide us.
I send for you and their relatives the best votes of a Merry Christmas and a 2006 full of peace, health, love, happiness and... new stories.
Kisses,
Yvonne
P.S. Did you already publish some book?
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